The cookie-making impulse always strikes at night,
the colder and darker the better.
The scent of chocolate-chip mish-mash is irresistible,
licking off the beaters,
filling the house with cookie-warmth.
You might be sitting on the couch,
(in fact, you probably are)
reading, or watching television,
when it hits you upside the tastebuds:
semi-sweet chocolate waiting for you,
in the cabinet, behind the pots and pans,
hiding from Dad.
(Dads not supposed to have sweets;
if you make the cookies, youll have to hide them, too,
and you really ought to have made them before he got home from work.)
The thought of those tiny little chips
sets you salivating, and you pull yourself up out of the couch.
How many eggs do you have?
How much butter is there?
Did anyone bother to buy more brown sugar
after you upturned the last bag onto your oatmeal?
You quickly scan the kitchen, the cabinets,
the pantry and refrigerator;
your brain cataloguing ingredients and utensils.
This could work, you think.
Half an hour, you think, and there could be cookies.
And enough milk left to dip them in.
Youre reaching for your apron
when your eye alights upon your book,
turned over-open on the arm of the couch,
or perhaps the television is back from its relentless commercial break.
The blanket sits just so,
beckoning your cold feet
(socks never help, you notice),
and you think,
Well, I can always make cookies tomorrow.














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after you upturned the last bag onto your oatmeal?
is my favourite bit, I think because it's a really cute, clear, honest image. I have a hard time w/ food poems for some reason.
I think this wants to be short prose.
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after you upturned the last bag onto your oatmeal?
I think there's probably too much poem here. I think this is a briefer thought, flitting across your brain. The part about dad is nice, but I don't know that it fits, or if it's a distraction.
The feeling of the poem is halfway between a children's story and a poem, and I think moving it one direction or the other would be good for it.
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each syntax, a new religion,
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Realize, sometimes I fall in love from a poem,
each language is its own passion
each syntax, a new religion,
and new words, a romance
I get lost in.
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